Don't waste words
Make sure you haven’t listed your academic achievements again.
Is everything in context? Does the paragraph about your hobbies relate to the courses you are applying for?
Are you stating things that are self-evident elsewhere on the form or are obvious anyway? For example:
I am applying for these courses because … My name is Dave and I want to study … My hobbies include …
The space is limited, so don’t waste it.
Last updated on: 21 November 2008